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FMA ficlet: Home
Dec. 29th, 2004 11:11 amMarissa has pointed out my excessive love for commas and such. I point out that I write these ficlets in splooges, with basically no editting or second glances before they're thrown out onto LiveJournal.
Title: Home
Fandom: FullMetal Alchemist
Pairing: (none, although characters are Maria Ross and Alphonse)
Rating: G?
Spoilers for... eh... episode... 43? 44? >_<
( Hohenheim was sitting outside the house with the dog Den and Edward was talking to the Colonel about military issues, while the rest of the people seemed to be occupying themselves with random conversations just fine. )
She first said that the ending was too subtle, so I went back and added a few words. Is it too subtle now, dearie?
Title: Home
Fandom: FullMetal Alchemist
Pairing: (none, although characters are Maria Ross and Alphonse)
Rating: G?
Spoilers for... eh... episode... 43? 44? >_<
( Hohenheim was sitting outside the house with the dog Den and Edward was talking to the Colonel about military issues, while the rest of the people seemed to be occupying themselves with random conversations just fine. )
She first said that the ending was too subtle, so I went back and added a few words. Is it too subtle now, dearie?
