Beginnings of a long FMA gen-fic

Okay, so this is the roughest rough draft I've done in a very long while, and it really shouldn't be posted here without at least some semblence of proofreading, but I haven't posted anything here in a while (so I feel vaguely guilty) and the flist on my other journal seems pretty busy right now so people haven't had time to beta stuff for me. ^^;;

I, uh, don't have any idea for a title right now, so I'll leave that up later. ^^;; It's confusing, needs a lot of work, and will be changed around a lot after it's beta'd by someone, but it's posted here 'cause I'm so so so sorry for not being here. T_T

FMA fic (movie comes out in 5 days!!), currently completely gen, although Elric-centric. AU after episode 42, before Al's stupid moments. :D Um, um... soooo, around 5,000 words of tripe right now. ^^;; Enjoy.

( It was dark where they were, but Ed could see Alphonse’s grey-green eyes zero in on him even through the dim lighting that they were given. )